One of the things I have discovered about myself lately is that I am a very passionate person. I guess this passion reflects in my poetry. I have often been criticized in the past that my poetry has been dark and depressing. Whatever!
I wrote this only this morning. It is for my soulmate whomever he is. I may have already met him or I may never meet him.
Can't Wait
My eyes can't wait to see your beautiful face again
My lips can't wait to touch yours
My arms can't wait to hold you and never let go
My hands can't wait to touch every part of your body
My body can't wait to love you
My heart can't wait until I have yours
My soul can't wait to be with you forever
I am to a point now that I am no longer a fledgling writer but I am not an expert either. How well I write depends on how I feel at any given moment. So please don't hold it against me. I am traveling a long road to understand more about myself and to just deal with life as it comes. "Sometimes It's A Bitch...Sometimes It's A Breeze".
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8 comments:
In college I took a creative writing course, and was told by my classmates and even my lecturer, that my works were too "dark".
I guess we shouldn't be too surprised should we, considering people write what they know?
Hi Marie!
It is good to hear from you :)
I have always thought of you being a passionate woman and I am glad that you have discovered that for yourself. Keep it flowing and positive things will continue to come your way.
((hugs))
BEAUTIFUL!!!! :)
Love it! I too am a hopeless romantic :)
Very passionate poem. Your heart and soul speak through your poem. I hope you meet your soulmate very soon. Just keep on writing especially poetry. They're good for your mind and soul. Smile always. God bless and have a nice and trouble free day.
Ahhh very romantic! Love it!
I love your new poem. You are an amazing writer/poet :)
Hey Marie~ Check your email sweetie, I sent you something interesting. :0)
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