A WORK IN PROGRESS

This is something I have been working on. This is just the beginning of it. Please feel free to comment and critique. I cannot improve without constructive criticism. Enjoy!


BEHIND THE LOOKING GLASS (WORKING TITLE)


She is getting ready to face another day in her routine life. She walks slowly down the hall until she sees the looking glass. She is standing there looking at her pretty woman face. She is wondering where she is and why she is here. She asks herself "Who am I? How did I get here? Is there something better waiting out there for me?" As she stands there and ponders these questions, a hand reaches from the glass and a voice says "Come, it is all right, you have nothing to fear". With the eyes of a child, she takes the hand and steps into the looking glass not knowing what is ahead. Is she ready to see what might be revealed? Is she ready for her questions to maybe finally be answered?

Now she is behind the looking glass. She sees a pathway and wonders what she has gotten herself into. Suddenly she hears a voice say "If you do not go, you will never know". With hesitation and fear she walks slowly down the path until she sees a small green house. It is wintertime, she sees children playing in the snow, faces red from the bitter cold.